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7am, breakfast on the cold concrete porch.

smell of fresh clean snow, and Heather's roses. They are blooming, through ice and snow. Her mother says Heather is sending her love. Hot tears burn frozen cheeks, cigarette trembling in my bare hands. The morning silence is never really silence. Sliced by the constant screaming pain of death and cancer and things left unsaid. Their pain weighs heavy on my shoulders, shows deep within my eyes. carry their crosses, stitch up their scars. Sweep up the pieces of broken lives, put them out by the curb. maybe tomorrow, it won't hurt so much.

11.24.03

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I just wroth this on the drive home

LOVE


I feel like a cheep whore that has been used too many times
I have been song in too many songs mentioned in too many rhymes
Love how many times I have heard you said and now there is no more
Love how many times have you crossed my lips and I can’t remember what for

So you have lost your value as the pleasure has turned to pain
I have become weary of love as my soul you have slain
I am not willing to help you lose your value so I shall not say
Even if I need to say I can no longer afford the price I might pay

Another time as my soul feels the need for you to be
But the prison you can become is not worth the risk to me
what do I do repeat you a hundred time as if in sips?
Will I even believe me as you flow threw my lips

Oh I wish I had never said you before so now I could believe
How I wish I didn’t feel you before how you deceived
So what do I do as I sit and wonder why
Should I risk the pain the tears the scars for another try?
I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I am not." - Kurt Cobain

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That's a really good poem. I find that with subjects like that one, I let my emotions run wild in the poem and ruin it. You did a wonderful job of conveying the emotion and creating a mental image with your descriptions and word choice. Send some more our way please :)
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*blushing* Thank you.

could you please collect your things


And I can feel your fingers begin to lose their grip upon my mind and now my heart can breathe.
Why I let you crush me, I'll never know.
The need to be embraced by something other than myself just got too strong I suppose.
I knew your destruction before I let you in, so the fault is mine.
I shouldn't be so quick to strip myself completely, I should learn to think before I place myself in your path wearing nothing but words on my skin.
I should have hidden my heart from your view.
i let you take a piece of my body from me and you tossed it aside to rot in the forgotten ashes of those who came before.
And my eyes will betray me if I do not stop these tears that weep for what I have done.
though my smile is brighter and my voice tends to sing when your name parts my lips, my body is bleeding and tearing inside.
you will never be mine for the taking.
yet I find these chains too heavy for my wings, and something will not let me fly.
something has fastened itself to my tongue and made me unable to speak. And it is here that I will die, and maybe you were just my last attempt to live; to breathe the air that feeds my soul.
And maybe this sudden explosion of poetry will be the last shade of beauty to drip from my fingers. your whispers of love songs are the last to tear my heart.

Not very good, but i like it anyway

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I figured a thread like this needs some corruptin' ;)

I woke up this morning..
to find some sweet lips on my cock..
It put a smile on my face..
Until I looked at the clock..

It was just 4 am you see..
the jetlag had kicked in..
And Plaything was up..
and looking to sin..

I was about to explode..
but she slowed the pace down..
then she stopped altogether..
and turned herself around..

She climbed up on top..
and rode me a while..
I was wide awake by then..
and I had a huge smile..

I was slapping her fine ass..
as she bounced up and down..
her tits were a-jiggling..
yeah.. she was going to town!

Suddenly she tensed..
and started to spasm..
she was starting the morning..
with a nice orgasm..

When the climax subsided..
she rolled off and onto her back..
Time for missionary..
I shoved it in all the way to my sack..

Her legs on my shoulders..
as I pounded away..
it was getting noisy in there..
as we started our day..

I felt the cum climbing..
It had definitely left the sack..
so I pulled out and shot it..
on her strip and stomach..

We layed there all sweaty..
enjoying the after sex glow..
then as playthingmade coffee I thought..
it's nice when your day starts with a blow..

:)
chopchop
gotta go... Plaything needs a spanking..

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and took me a good 20 minutes to compose..




and when you recite it at the DZ, you can recite it using "twas the nite before Xmas" 's cadence.
I promise not to TP Davis under canopy.. I promise not to TP Davis under canopy.. eat sushi, get smoochieTTK#1

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I figured a thread like this needs some corruptin' ;)

You're at it again..
Our sex life you expose,
So this-my reply
To your poem-I compose.

Now yes, it is true-
That I woke you in South, ;)
And also it's true...
I was using my mouth..

But I only had stopped-
Cause Damn Asthma kicked in.. [:/]
And I was upset...
Cause I wanted to Sin. :)

But After that taste-
Of The man I adore..
I couldn't stop there,
I needed some more. :$

So with that in mind,
I straddled a ride..
And Rode on my man,
Just to have him inside... ;)

So thank God for pillows-
I can't help my Sounds,
My pillow got bitten..
While you felt up my mounds. :)

Orgasms come easy-
Fully clothed you can bet...
One touch with your hands..
And my land strip gets wet. :)
So though I attacked you,
I'm blaming your hands..
One wisp of a stroke..
And this girl makes demands.

So, now that you exposed..
Lots about me-to know,
You'd think I'd be mad
Hold out-or not blow.. :|

But that is not me..
And you know that it's true..
I can't resist 'man' ...
But especially you!! :)
So I will continue-
To Show you I care..
And do what you must-
To this body I bare.

I don't give a shit,
When you talk in this thread..
They don't get techniques..
Just on how I give head. ;)

They don't know what wets me...
Or steps that you score...
So get in my bed...
And give me some more!! :)

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My mind is like a parachute...it functions only when open.

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Huh?? :S ... :D



sorry but in your previous reply, I saw no comment, additions, etc to Roy's post... just pointin fingers thats all! :o:P
Goddam dirty hippies piss me off! ~GFD
"What do I get for closing your rig?" ~ me
"Anything you want." ~ female skydiver
Mohoso Rodriguez #865

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This is a poem I wrote several years ago, dedicated to all those who never came back from their flights over Germany 1939-1945

WILL I GET HOME AGAIN

The day had started warm and bright
Its good to be alive,
But what will happen by tonight
Cause we take off at five.
We go to bomb our country's foe
Across the channel wide,
Who knows if I'll get back again,
So many went, and died.

I think of when I was a lad
My father was around,
He surely didnt raise me up
To crash on foreign ground.
Oh how I miss those days of yore,
It was so peaceful then,
Who knows if after this days' gone
If I'll get home again.

Our lancs will have their bellies stuffed
With many tons of death,
Andf always when above the foe
I'm sure to lose my breath.
The inky sky is cold and dark,
They're firing at our plane,
Will we get in to drop our bombs?
Will I get back again?

Wave after wave of bombers fly
Across the target zone,
The searchlights shine from far below,
They get one in a cone.
A hit is taken on its wing,
It spouts an orange flame,
The crew bails out, and then I ask,
Will I get back again?

The Pathfinders have marked the spot,
Our target is so clear,
The bombs are dropped, a voice calls out
Get my ass out of here.
The engines roar and up we go
To level off our plane,
It looks like we have done our job,
And I'll get back again.

The lights of London shine below,
The channel slips behind,
I'll soon be sleeping in my bunk,
I hope with peace of mind.
With every mission that we fly
Its like an old refrain,
Cause I will pray through dark of night
That I'll get back again.

I hope this fighting soon will stop
And peace will come to all,
And only stars are in the sky
And not a bomb will fall.
I really know within my heart
That war is so insane,
I hope this war will soon be won
And I'll get hopme again.


Bill Cole D-41.


and here is another...with a reference to SWOOP lol

Up in the pine tree
Dark and green
The great Horned Owl
Is seldom seen.
He scans the forest floor below
A long eared Jack
Runs to and fro,
The Owl swoops down on velvet wing,
The long eared Jack
Wont hear a thing.
Some rustling leaves
With spots of red
The long eared Jack,
So swiftly dead.


:ph34r:




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Okay... Here is a couple of my serious ones...

WHEN YOU LOOK AT ME

I noticed when you look at me,
Your eyes do more than glance-
You show me sweet elation,
Through eyes of sweet romance.

When you look into my eyes again,
You're holding me completely..
A hundred gazes gifts one sole,
Calls out to me so sweetly.

You reach my heart without a word-
You hold my love in view...
A moment in your silent stare-
Your eyes in shades of blue.

So when my eyes look back at you,
This rare love we have found..
My eyes will show you only love,
My love for you- Profound.

I hold you for a moment,
But think of you so much..
I wait to be beside you-
I'm waiting for your touch.

I noticed when you look at me-
This chance of life-was gifted..
A sign of hope for broken soles...
A pain our love has lifted.

By Lany G. .... And Another .... (BTW ... These are going in my book.. I just have to take the time to finish my editing) :S ....

EMPATHY

A thousand words cannot compare,
To all the moments two can share.
And all the moments lived apart,
Is living in each lovers heart.

Remembering our hearts would race,
When holding in our loves embrace.
The caring that our touch would show,
The tears I felt when you would go.

The dreams of things that we would do,
But at that time we never knew...
That love so strong would have to end,
It isn't read in notes we send.

For all the love you left in me,
My sudden switch of empathy.
For reasons why you had to go,
Today I understand- and know.

I miss what we had everyday,
I miss your touch in everyway.
I truly hope that you'll succeed,
With all the things you want & need.

A love with you- I won't regret,
A time of love I won't forget.
I hold you in my heart for good,
As long as God believes I should.

By Lany G.
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My mind is like a parachute...it functions only when open.

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I ran across this today, written about a certain skydiver (I'll never tell) this summer. it is unfinished, and will probably remain unfinishd. I like it better that way.

I am haunted by these visions of you...
I wake with your taste on my lips and your voice on my skin.
Mornings spent, praying for sleep to return.
Aching to fall back into your bed, to feel your hands in my hair, my nails in your back....



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Here is another one


Lost

Angels cry as they feel the last good bye
No more time no explanations to the reasons why
Turned to gray no more life or energy
No more smiles your eyes could set me free
Now closed forever cold with no pulse
Every thing I have ever believed has turned out to be false
So as I sit on the ground that you are beneath
I light a cigarette and pretend that we can still speak

The tears don’t matter nothing will bring you life I fear
My screams my pain the lonely ness I feel with out you near
So what am I left to do but sit until my time has come
Stupid, Sad, Giving up it may seem to some

But my soul is cold and it is fading away
In this earth with out you I will not stay.

So as I feel heat and see the flash
Our worlds finally seem to clash
I can see the red spray behind on the wall
I even hear the thud as my body falls
The images slowly turned to gray
My one way train is here to take me away
God I feel cold I hope you can forgive me
The gray is turning to black I can no longer see
I will burn a hundred years in hell just to hold you by my side
For you I am nothing I am empathy not a man, no pride.
I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I am not." - Kurt Cobain

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Hmm... This thread has tempted me before, but I have kept quiet. Now as the rain is drizzling and beginning to mix with snow outside, I am tempted yet again, so here goes.

Autumn Rain

The rain is falling gently
Against the window pane.
It draws my focus to the world outside.
My gaze holds so intently
I clearly can't maintain
Concentration on the tasks I must abide.

My mind will not obey me.
It has run away again.
I no longer have any control.
It seems my thoughts betray me.
I am taken back to when
You were the missing piece that made me whole.

I remember how, so clearly,
We were caught out in the rain.
The Autumn air was numbing to the bone.
But that chill was not as nearly
As horrid to sustain
As the cold I hold inside now I'm alone.

It is not a finished piece, but it seemed suitable today. Every now and then something just brings back a memory or feeling... I'm sure you can probably relate in some way or another. It never ceases to amaze me what little thing can pull those emotions out again...
~~~~
Rachel
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-Converting the world one whuffo at a time.

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