tumbler 0 #1 September 14, 2005 Here's a prime example of "Men Are From Mars, Women Are From Venus" offered by an English professor from the University of Phoenix: The professor told his class one day: "Today we will experiment with a new form called the tandem story. The process is simple. Each person will pair off with the person sitting to his or her immediate right. As homework tonight, one of you will write the first paragraph of a short story. You will e-mail your partner that paragraph and send another copy to me. The partner will read the first paragraph and then add another paragraph to the story and send it back, so sending another copy to me. The first person will then add a third paragraph, and so on back-and-forth. Remember to re-read what has been written each time in order to keep the story coherent. There is to be absolutely NO talking outside of the e-mails and anything you wish to say must be written in the e-mail. The story is over when both agree a conclusion has been reached." The following was actually turned in by two of his English students: Rebecca and Gary. THE STORY: (first paragraph by Rebecca) At first, Laurie couldn't decide which kind of tea she wanted. The chamomile, which used to be her favorite for lazy evenings at home, now reminded her too much of Carl, who once said, in happier times, that he liked chamomile. But she felt she must now, at all costs, keep her mind off Carl. His possessiveness was suffocating, and if she thought about him too much her asthma started acting up again. So chamomile was out of the question. (second paragraph by Gary) Meanwhile, Advance Sergeant Carl Harris, leader of the attack squadron now in orbit over Skylon 4, had more important things to think about than the neuroses of an air-headed asthmatic bimbo named Laurie with whom he had spent one sweaty night over a year ago. "A.S. Harris to Geostation 17," he said into his transgalactic communicator. "Polar orbit established. No sign of resistance so far..." But before he could sign off a bluish particle beam flashed out of nowhere and blasted a hole through his ship's cargo bay. The jolt from the direct hit sent him flying out of his seat and across the cockpit. (Rebecca) He bumped his head and died almost immediately, but not before he felt one last pang of regret for psychically brutalizing the one woman who had ever had feelings for him. Soon afterwards, Earth stopped its pointless hostilities towards the peaceful farmers of Skylon 4. "Congress Passes Law Permanently Abolishing War and Space Travel," Laurie read in her newspaper one morning. The news simultaneously excited her and bored her. She stared out the window, dreaming of her youth, when the days had passed unhurriedly and carefree, with no newspaper to read, no television to distract her from her sense of innocent wonder at all the beautiful things around her. "Why must one lose one's innocence to become a woman?" she pondered wistfully. (Gary ) Little did she know, but she had less than 10 seconds to live. Thousands of miles above the city, the Anu'udrian mothership launched the first of its lithium fusion missiles. The dim-witted wimpy peaceniks who pushed the Unilateral Aerospace disarmament Treaty through the congress had left Earth a defenseless target for the hostile alien empires who were determined to destroy the human race. Within two hours after the passage of the treaty the Anu'udrian ships were on course for Earth, carrying enough firepower to pulverize the entire planet. With no one to stop them, they swiftly initiated their diabolical plan. The lithium fusion missile entered the atmosphere unimpeded. The President, in his top-secret mobile submarine headquarters on the ocean floor off the coast of Guam, felt the inconceivably massive explosion, which vaporized poor, stupid Laurie. (Rebecca) This is absurd. I refuse to continue this mockery of literature. My writing partner is a violent, chauvinistic semi-literate adolescent. (Gary) Yeah? Well, my writing partner is a self-centered tedious neurotic whose attempts at writing are the literary equivalent of Valium. "Oh, shall I have chamomile tea? Or shall I have some other sort of F--KING TEA??? Oh no, what am I to do? I'm such an air headed bimbo who reads too many Danielle Steele novels!" (Rebecca) Asshole. (Gary) Bitch (Rebecca) F__K YOU - YOU NEANDERTHAL! (Gary) Go drink some tea - whore. (TEACHER) A+ - I really liked this one. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rebecca 0 #3 September 14, 2005 I LOVE that one! Well, except for her being Rebecca. No real Rebecca would have ever started a blank page debating Chamomile tea! Psh! As IF!! Let's make our own story! (Please spell and punctuate properly.) "How do I always end up in these situations?" she thought. Bound at the ankles and wrists, her captors were eyeing her greedily, torn between the promise of the massive bounty for her 'unspoiled' delivery to the Cobra, and the lust her lithe writhing form was inspiring in their evil hearts. J wasn't worried, but her captors should have been. They had no idea who they were dealing with. you've got to ask yourself one question: 'Do I feel loquacious?' -- well do you, punk? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bolas 5 #4 September 14, 2005 At the same time, the J's leftovers club was meeting for their weekly bitch and cry. The members seemed to be ever increasing, but the story was always the same: "She was the best ever, I'm spoiled for all other women." They would hug, drink tea, and then eat finger sandwiches since they were now all gay.Stupidity if left untreated is self-correcting If ya can't be good, look good, if that fails, make 'em laugh. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ACMESkydiver 0 #5 September 14, 2005 That's fuggin' hilarious!! Ok, since I'm a chick, I can't respond to Rebecca's paragraph, so I'll just wait quietly over here <---. Tap. Tap, Tap. Tap, Tap, Tap. Tap, Tap, Tap, Tap. Tap, Tap, Tap, Tap, Tap.~Jaye Do not believe that possibly you can escape the reward of your action. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rebecca 0 #6 September 14, 2005 QuoteAt the same time, the J's leftovers club was meeting for their weekly bitch and cry. The members seemed to be ever increasing, but the story was always the same: "She was the best ever, I'm spoiled for all other women." They would hug, drink tea, and then eat finger sandwiches since they were now all gay. Breaking men was but one of her many talents, a fact her captors would soon realize. Though the rope was expertly tied, the razors under her blood-red nails made short work of it... you've got to ask yourself one question: 'Do I feel loquacious?' -- well do you, punk? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bolas 5 #7 September 14, 2005 Quote"How do I always end up in these situations?" she thought. Bound at the ankles and wrists, her captors were eyeing her greedily, torn between the promise of the massive bounty for her 'unspoiled' delivery to the Cobra, and the lust her lithe writhing form was inspiring in their evil hearts. J wasn't worried, but her captors should have been. They had no idea who they were dealing with. At the same time, the J's leftovers club was meeting for their weekly bitch and cry. The members seemed to be ever increasing, but the story was always the same: "She was the best ever, I'm spoiled for all other women." They would hug, drink tea, and then eat finger sandwiches since they were now all gay. Breaking men was but one of her many talents, a fact her captors would soon realize. Though the rope was expertly tied, the razors under her blood-red nails made short work of it... The men in the group were conflicted over paying the men to kidnap her and sell her into slavery, but then they remembered their shattered manhood and reminded themselves she must be stopped.Stupidity if left untreated is self-correcting If ya can't be good, look good, if that fails, make 'em laugh. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
srsublime 0 #8 September 14, 2005 LMAO!!!! That was GREAT! Geeze, where do y'all find these things? Orfun #21... thanks PsychoBob! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
masterrig 1 #9 September 14, 2005 QuoteI LOVE that one! Well, except for her being Rebecca. No real Rebecca would have ever started a blank page debating Chamomile tea! Psh! As IF!! Let's make our own story! (Please spell and punctuate properly.) "How do I always end up in these situations?" she thought. Bound at the ankles and wrists, her captors were eyeing her greedily, torn between the promise of the massive bounty for her 'unspoiled' delivery to the Cobra, and the lust her lithe writhing form was inspiring in their evil hearts. J wasn't worried, but her captors should have been. They had no idea who they were dealing with. __________________________________________ Dayum! Not bad! you could write romance novels! Chuck Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites