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MikeJD - Oops, I forget, sometimes, that my job of editing college entrance essays (and my niece's homework) can be put aside...habit. I really loved your poem! :D can I borrow a jump ticket real quick?

MikeJD - Yes! With guitar around the bonfire! I thought it was great! There is a small grammatical issue in the middle - just a read through will do the trick ;) over-all, I felt it clearly. Great job! Psst> I gotta do one about the bonfire, but mine would be too sappy...you first! :) can I borrow a jump ticket real quick?

Really lovely. You have an excellent grasp of what it means to live life as a human; it is a tangle of wonders. :) can I borrow a jump ticket real quick?

I should rely more on watches. can I borrow a jump ticket real quick?

This is amazing! I love the grasping of statistics to explain the unexplainable; really clever. I also had a good laugh remembering my own, numerous, passing breezes! They sometimes suck - but there have also been times....:) Well done! can I borrow a jump ticket real quick?

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First, thanks! Second... confusing grammatically or something else?

I have a ceramic frog nic-nac in my garden named Jeremiah! I loved that song! can I borrow a jump ticket real quick?

And Liz too I suspect - the speculation is still unanswered. Which begs the question, "what ever happened to Liz?" Regardless, just don't get in a car with her, and you'll be fine ;) can I borrow a jump ticket real quick?

Yeah, I know! That's because he owes me a freaking jump ticket! :D can I borrow a jump ticket real quick?

I love this even more on the second reading! Tho the last word puzzles me, it is seems clever for all its dissonance.

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xm5DPlNCmtk I forgot the title and had to sing the whole first verse to myself! Ha! But I always hear this in my head, and it reminds me of tobacco barns, dry dust, my pony, Squirt, and raspberries. Mmmmm! Born to be Wild! can I borrow a jump ticket real quick?

"Lazy bones, layin' in the shade, how you gonna get your cornmeal made? How you gonna get your cornmeal made, layin' all day in the shade?" Ahhh, goin' back to sleep now... can I borrow a jump ticket real quick?

I LOVED that! I feel so deprived of childhood educational experiences now! My Mom was neglectful (Wack!) Ok! just kidding, jeez! can I borrow a jump ticket real quick?

Really beautiful. I am thinking haiku... Rich and yellow seed, fall gently from my flower, momma loved you once. can I borrow a jump ticket real quick?

There isn't a day that goes by without you right there with me. Flower, play with me upon the earthen table sad stories told sweet. Love, Jeannie can I borrow a jump ticket real quick?

Bitter sweet. can I borrow a jump ticket real quick?

You just gave me all kinds of ideas...thx:) On parchment rouge quills dipt in inks of blood blackness spills across my breast and tides unruly flood 2B or not 2B is asked a simple form of query morning tides surrender this a time on lips and cherry. Cherry-colored Time Does an apple wait to be polished, do you think; does a cornstalk wait for the whispering wind to blow away the dry dust? Does jasmine smell sweet for a nose, or a bird-song only sound lovely to itself echoing off the morning? Is a man's blood really red, or is it only cherry-colored time? Are tears heard and laughter felt? Or is it all real somehow to the light that wakes because it has a reason? Misty eyes and memories goals wished instead of formed I cry cherry-colored time and wait for it to pass to merry tulips sniffing sweet blue sky blossoms and dizzy salamanders agrip to bloodwine stems of needy chance waiting for faeries waiting with watermelon smiles dripping mango wings and lips brushed with gladness for moments relished in pickled cucumbers waiting for cherry-colored time to pass (It's that acid I dropped 30 years ago, I'm sure of it...JK:D can I borrow a jump ticket real quick?

On parchment rouge quills dipt in inks of blood blackness spills across my breast and tides unruly flood 2B or not 2B is asked a simple form of query morning tides surrender this a time on lips and cherry. can I borrow a jump ticket real quick?

when days are darkest feet firmly planted in clouds yields visible sun

Heather Little blue flower, alone in a sea of struggling green. Brown winds blow over, throttling your last breath. Breathe, and show me sweetness while the choking gramineae protests, and the sun smiles, and you sing your silly songs can I borrow a jump ticket real quick?

Nice! I just started a new thread "poet's corner." Come and visit! :) can I borrow a jump ticket real quick?

Playing with iambic pentameter... Faith The sky marks true those times of flight unseen to lose a breath at wonders begs to mean we notice now a Truth so fair and bold a lifetime in the clouds awaits the old. And souls who would not see this fairest Truth those wretched lives who lived in saddest days spend ever in the wasted hands of proof 'till blueness harks and burns away the haze. Insomnia... Cast clues and rope, my one true hope is caught and in the reach my eye is pressed and wrought to shades of thumping rhythm I go not 'cept in this realm where beg begins begot Litter Bugs And so we stand upon this earth and age Not flight of bird, nor cougar's death; unfazed Vile water sinks into the dirt; we pay A price to harm The Mother every day can I borrow a jump ticket real quick?