Learnskydiving 0 #1 January 28, 2012 Could everyone have a look at www.learnskydiving.co.uk Can you tell me if you can see any mistakes and if you like the website? Thanks Barry Maple AFF course, 1 week in the sun www.learnskydiving.co.uk Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DiverMike 5 #2 January 29, 2012 The site appears to be professionally developed. I like the gallery and the feature to hover over the picture for a description. I would suggest removing the "Here is" part, as it adds nothing. Instead of "Here is Keith on AFF-1", just say "Kieth is on AFF-1." Also, flesh out the content. Some of the pictures just have a short sentence. Just throw in some of your FAQ responses to add information, such as "Keith is using advanced state-of-the-art equipment that is included in the course". For the same reason I jump off a perfectly good diving board. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sacex250 0 #3 January 29, 2012 What's the new school? This sounds more like Skyride trying to sell AFF courses at established dropzones.It's all been said before, no sense repeating it here. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
richardw38 0 #4 January 29, 2012 Looks good Barry. You have a few pics of people doing FS stuff in the gallery, but no mention of it anywhere else. You might want to fix that if you are planning on doing more FS stuff. I'm really glad I did the FS with you before I left the UK. In Aus, the FS stuff is part of the B license, so, I was able to get the Aus B license when I went to a local DZ. Whats skyride? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Squeak 17 #5 January 29, 2012 QuoteWhat's the new school? This sounds more like Skyride trying to sell AFF courses at established dropzones. which is NOTHING like Skyride, This guy is advertising an AFF program that can (if you choose) be held at different DZs around the world.You are not now, nor will you ever be, good enough to not die in this sport (Sparky) My Life ROCKS! How's yours doing? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jclalor 12 #6 January 29, 2012 from the FAQ; Will I my body ache after two or three jumps a day? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
skydog 2 #7 January 31, 2012 In the "About Us" I would be worried by the "has been" qualified as an Instructor etc. Should state the bodies he is currently approved by?Journey not destination..... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites