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AggieDave

Friday Haiku (on Wednesday)

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SkyDekker's argument blows.



Actually Quade, from your own link:

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Further see THIS tome.



Comes:

"It was traditionally demanded to adopt a kigo (season word: word reffering to a season) in the first verse of renga and haikai. Therefore, they demand to introduce a kigo in a hokku (and in a haiku) too."

Which would prove that my argument does not blow, but that most of you are using haikus incorrectly. ;)

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LOL...OK how about this:

Clouds drape the mountains;
They hold uncertain beauty.
Snow is coming soon.

Thought it up as I was driving home yesterday...and it snowed 6 inches last night. I was always told that haiku were supposed to be about nature in some way...
Never meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup!

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Spring brings much laughter.
No joking for SkyDekker?
His poems have no joy?

Yet in the battle,
He sees no allegory,
Only the strict rule.

Blow alludes to wind,
And he sees not the humor.
Much is the pity.
quade -
The World's Most Boring Skydiver

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I don't know if that's a haiku, but if you read it while doing an impression of Yoda . . . it's pretty funny.



[Yoda voice]
Hmmmm...smart are you...hhhmmmm? yesssss. :P
[/Yoda voice]
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Blue Skies and May the Force be with you.

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Slick streets before me
Cold weather all around me
Winter cycling sucks
There is nothing more dangerous than breaking a basic safety rule and getting away with it. It removes fear of the consequences and builds false confidence. (tbrown)

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