quade 3 #26 February 26, 2003 Further see THIS tome. The history of haikai, Is filled with laughter.quade - The World's Most Boring Skydiver Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lizzieb 0 #27 February 26, 2003 oh shit, what is that? Look up at the sky...here comes the swoopy monster Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hookitt 0 #28 February 26, 2003 shutting off DZ dot com was a goal not made you post whore you (smile) My grammar sometimes resembles that of magnetic refrigerator poetry... Ghetto Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lizzieb 0 #29 February 26, 2003 i cannot help it i don't want to do my work i am too tired Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SkyDekker 1,121 #30 February 27, 2003 Quote SkyDekker's argument blows. Actually Quade, from your own link: Quote Further see THIS tome. Comes: "It was traditionally demanded to adopt a kigo (season word: word reffering to a season) in the first verse of renga and haikai. Therefore, they demand to introduce a kigo in a hokku (and in a haiku) too." Which would prove that my argument does not blow, but that most of you are using haikus incorrectly. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BikerBabe 0 #31 February 27, 2003 LOL...OK how about this: Clouds drape the mountains; They hold uncertain beauty. Snow is coming soon. Thought it up as I was driving home yesterday...and it snowed 6 inches last night. I was always told that haiku were supposed to be about nature in some way...Never meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy and taste good with ketchup! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
quade 3 #32 February 27, 2003 Spring brings much laughter. No joking for SkyDekker? His poems have no joy? Yet in the battle, He sees no allegory, Only the strict rule. Blow alludes to wind, And he sees not the humor. Much is the pity.quade - The World's Most Boring Skydiver Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CrazyIvan 0 #33 February 27, 2003 Snow all over grounded I am Springtime come over! is almost time...DAMN!!__________________________________________ Blue Skies and May the Force be with you. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sebazz1 2 #34 February 27, 2003 I contemplated Ancient classic haiku rules Screw that season sh*t... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
quade 3 #35 February 27, 2003 I don't know if that's a haiku, but if you read it while doing an impression of Yoda . . . it's pretty funny.quade - The World's Most Boring Skydiver Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Brains 2 #36 February 27, 2003 Quote I don't know if that's a haiku, but if you read it while doing an impression of Yoda . . . it's pretty funny. Ok, how many of you went back and read it in a yoda voice?? Never look down on someone, unless they are going down on you. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sebazz1 2 #37 February 27, 2003 I did. My neighbours think I am a freak right now.... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lizzieb 0 #38 February 27, 2003 Quote I did. My neighbours think I am a freak right now.... you are a freak Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CrazyIvan 0 #39 February 27, 2003 Quote I don't know if that's a haiku, but if you read it while doing an impression of Yoda . . . it's pretty funny. [Yoda voice] Hmmmm...smart are you...hhhmmmm? yesssss. [/Yoda voice]__________________________________________ Blue Skies and May the Force be with you. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
wmw999 2,120 #40 February 27, 2003 Slick streets before me Cold weather all around me Winter cycling sucksThere is nothing more dangerous than breaking a basic safety rule and getting away with it. It removes fear of the consequences and builds false confidence. (tbrown) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sunshine 2 #41 February 27, 2003 Quote I did. My neighbours think I am a freak right now.... Baby, after the screams coming from your place last time i visited, your neighbors KNOW you're a freak. ___________________________________________ meow I get a Mike hug! I get a Mike hug! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sebazz1 2 #42 February 27, 2003 We jump Saturday In tribute to Timmy D. Eternal blue skies... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sebazz1 2 #43 February 27, 2003 The house is rockin Screams eminating loudly Neighbours wonder, WoW!... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites