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I am still tired, ugh



You're an Alabaman.....so that should be pronounced "I am still ti-urd, ugh."....which is 6 syllables.....which puts you over the accepted norm of 5-7-5. Sorry, but you are the weakest link.....goodbye. :o

Maybe you should have written :

"Too early in the
Morn to listen to Don's shit --
Go to hell, fuckhead."

This not only follows the standard haiku form, but it also states truthful concepts....it IS too early in the day to listen to Don's crap, and Don IS a fuckhead. (will I get censured for a personal attack against myself ?). :S

Carry on.


Don

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I have to work too!
cant post whore like you lazies
so thats my excuse!

as far as her wit
from all the pictures I've seen
should that be her whip?



what pictures are those?
please let me know what you've seen
So I can deny!


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Blondes do have more fun!

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Dictionary says
Don was right aboot us, eh
Yes, four syllables

:P

As for the 'piss poor'
We got rocks and trees and lakes
Wonderous nature
:P:P

[Mr. Smart Ass] a Haiku is ALSO supposed to make referecne to a season or to nature [/Mr. Smart Ass]

-Dave


Life is very short and there's no time for fussing and fighting my friend (Lennon/McCartney)

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[Mr. Smart Ass] a Haiku is ALSO supposed to make referecne to a season or to nature [/Mr. Smart Ass]

-Dave



Okay Mister Dave
Season here is very hot
But who gives a shit?

I'm stuck here inside
Typing on the computer
Wishing I could jump!


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Blondes do have more fun!

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