Zipp0 1 #1 August 6, 2007 It's a genesis for a song..... an idea. I have some lyrics in mind, but I just recorded some guitar improv for now - to fill the space. You would laugh if you saw the acoustic guitar I was using. It is some POS 'Encore' that is held together with packing tape. The electric is a nice Fender. Anyway.... does it have potential? http://www.mustseedaily.com/newsong.mp3 -------------------------- Chuck Norris doesn't do push-ups, he pushes the Earth down. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PikzeeVikzen 0 #2 August 6, 2007 I dig it. makes me think of a steamy island love affair I'm the twist that turns your key.... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zipp0 1 #3 August 6, 2007 Thanks. I think the overall sound will change once I figure out what I am doing lyrically. I am never happy with what I come up with in that arena. I listen to genius like this: Then take me disappearin' through the smoke rings of my mind, Down the foggy ruins of time, far past the frozen leaves, The haunted, frightened trees, out to the windy beach, Far from the twisted reach of crazy sorrow. Yes, to dance beneath the diamond sky with one hand waving free, Silhouetted by the sea, circled by the circus sands, With all memory and fate driven deep beneath the waves, Let me forget about today until tomorrow. ________________________ And then I listen to my lyrics and it's just not there. -------------------------- Chuck Norris doesn't do push-ups, he pushes the Earth down. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PikzeeVikzen 0 #4 August 6, 2007 I am never happen with lyrics I come up with either. I like what you've got very much though! I'm the twist that turns your key.... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
