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I have a tin ear, so I can't / won't comment on the quality of the recording, but I think if YOU enjoyed doing this you should proceed. :)
That being said, I don't understand why you would put out a version, which you know is so far from what you want it to be, that you would apologize for it. I NEVER let the public see a half-finished painting of mine. I MIGHT let a trusted artist friend see it for critique, but the public only thinks they know stuff!. ;) They really don't, even though they will give advice (ad nauseum) about what I should do. [:/]

If you do go ahead and record this for public consumption, something to consider is finding / making some sort of image(s) to go with it. Images that both make sense with the song AND mean something personal to YOU. See, even I can't resist telling you what you should do. :$:)

Good luck, and don't forget to enjoy the process! I would definitely like to see the finished product! :)
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Thanks for the feed back.


I understand the video aspect of the music.
Its only about a minute long. I'm not too concerned about people hearing this version because this is not how I make a living.

If you heard me play around the neighborhood/bonfire etc
I'd still hit some burps.

I just want to get some comments to encourage her to finish the song. I cant post the complete version without it being completed.
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I enjoyed listening to it.

Nice playing, and she has a pleasant, natural voice - couple of tuning issues, but nothing that wouldn't be fixed by rehearsing it plenty of times before you go for a final take.

One thing I'd say is, it sounded to me as though Beth was a bit uncomfortable with the low notes. Have you tried transposing it so she can use a higher register?

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I enjoyed listening to it.

Nice playing, and she has a pleasant, natural voice - couple of tuning issues, but nothing that wouldn't be fixed by rehearsing it plenty of times before you go for a final take.

One thing I'd say is, it sounded to me as though Beth was a bit uncomfortable with the low notes. Have you tried transposing it so she can use a higher register?



Thanks for the feedback.

I haven't tried to transpose. It's something I may do when I get her to record this though.
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I'm not too concerned about people hearing this version because this is not how I make a living.



That doesn't negate the good advice from oldwomanc6. You never know what tomorrow will bring.
You don't have to outrun the bear.

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I'm not too concerned about people hearing this version because this is not how I make a living.



That doesn't negate the good advice from oldwomanc6. You never know what tomorrow will bring.



I'm not getting the point?
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Sounded good to me. Do you know the whole song, lead, etc.? Use a capo?
I remember playing guitar with you at Perris many years ago, by the pool area.



I remember,too. Gary.

I capo the 3rd fret.
I havent bothered with the lead. I know MOST of the song.
I just have to sit and record it...if I can find the time.

My plan was to have the music track already recorded and let her sing over it...


But, I'd also like to record it live.
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